Do You Hear?

by Daniel Mulvany   Apr 18, 2006


Do you hear my broken heart,
Calling out for you to mend,
Each fragile peice and mangled part,
In pain suspending end from end?
In hopeless words surrendered I,
My heart and soul forever yours,
And in each thought these words apply,
This pain occurs, this pain endurs!
Incurring tears from empty eyes,
Suffering within each moment,
Without hope of compromise,
Nor reparation or atonement.
Do you hear, oh do you hear?
Did this not your soul impact?
Don't you long to hold me near?
To help me keep this soul intact?
You promised me, you promised that,
Forever couldn't hold us in and,
Even though the world weren't flat,
You'd walk with me off it's end.
Yet, seems that through this ruined vow,
You've left me with a heart that's broken.
If only you could hear me now,
Calling out with words unspoken.

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  • 13 years ago

    by shayla

    I really love this poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Loving singers comment:

    i love the frist part , and the question ,

    i love this ,

    jsut do it in paragraphs , not one peace , it would be a grreat one

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Very catchy poem, excellent flow

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow.. i LOVED this poem.. it was soo romantic and sweet.. it was just beautiful! the flow was excellent and the rhyming had no mistakes as far as i can see! keep up the wonderful work!

  • That put a smile on my face!! It was so beauifully written!! Another amazing job!! I like how you dont put your poems in stanzas or at least the ones i have read!! 5/5!! Awesome!!

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