by Bhavin Apr 18, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
first love
It was a dark and stormy day |
Another wonderful poem by a master of poetry...ur poems always touches the heart...i wish i knew where u come up with the ideas.......they are amazing..and i love them......this poem was so beautfiul and innocent in so many ways |
by shobhana kumar
Bhavin, sorry for the delayed response to your work. this is a good piece of work! |
by Kaylee
I don't say this alot but this poem was amazing. I loved the imagery that the story (poem) presented. I don't know if love should be capitalized at the end butt it does make the point stand out. Wow...I really can't believe this. |
by Sondos
This is beautiful. Wonderful imagery and great adjectives to build an elaborate love story |