I love this poem Tyler. and this is me sarah. Umm please email me or sumthing i miss talking to you. oh yea just wundering....who is this poem about?
i love you... Sarah
xoxox

So sweet, great dedication,... 5/5

This poem might not be the best love poem ever written but it was beautiful in the way that it captured the feeling of very young love so perfectly. It was a bit repetitive in parts but I think that worked in your favor. I really liked your final line. It felt like you could put an image to words and tied the poem so well.

Awww.. that is one lucky girl! ur poem is very cute! keep it up!
jessy

Awww this poem is so good
nice job =]