Let The Angel Rot In Peace

by *Cosmic*Whispers*   Apr 18, 2006


Shaken to the core
Watch her eyes they're bleeding
Nailed to Lucifer's door
Deafened by her own sweet breathing

Sew a web of lies
Ensnare the ones you love to hate
Blow smoke into her eyes
It's the torture that makes her great

It was in you she held her trust
Let the Angel Rot In Peace
Cover her with dirt & dust
So her pain will never cease

Gasping without air
She's trapped now; 6 foot deep
Blood's matted her long hair
Vicious demons start to creep

Whispered thoughts of love
Echo through her twisted mind
Satan gives her the last shove
As she leaves this world behind

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  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Oooh, I love this! It's so creepy and just perfectly written.
    I'm really surprised at how well the rhymes were, that rhyme scheme is so challenging, yet it didn't sound forced at all.
    Well done, truly outstanding piece!
    Take care and keep it up~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by Amberinaa

    Wow, awsome job. Loved it! I could practically visualize it.. loved it.

    Gasping without air
    She's trapped now; 6 foot deep
    Blood's matted her long hair
    Vicious demons start to creep

    Great job:D

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaitlyn

    Wow..i really love this. it has so uch description to it that makes it really interesting. and capturing. it has a really good structure to it. =]

    Kat

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