Amazing poem! i loved it, so many descriptions and imagery, and the rhyming was very well done. 5/5
take care,
xxEmmaxxx

"Stare at the truth you're too blind to see
Searching for some clarity
Always trying to break free
From these chains restraining me"

I really loved that stanxa^^^but they were all amzing. This is one of my favorite poems of yours...would you mind if I put it on my myspace? I'll say it's yours of course...Great job, really hun...You have so much talent..I really hope to see more of your poetry soon.
5.5
Breanna