Count To Three

by *Cosmic*Whispers*   Apr 18, 2006


I've got you here, beneath my skin
I'm running a race that I can't win
Trying to banish this evil sin
But it drags me slowly in

The noose grows tighter, I'm alone
Choking on the fears I've grown
Am I to die here on my own?
Trapped upon my broken thrown

I know you hear my silent cries
You see the tears fall from my eyes
Trapped in a body I despise
And still you whisper filthy lies

Falling faster through the air
Can't help this feeling of despair
Why do i still even care
When I land I know you wont be there

Why wont you leave me be
Can't you see what you do to me
I'm growing weaker now, you'll see
Clutch the trigger, Count To Three

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  • 18 years ago

    by Miss Megan

    Brillant poem!-i'm literally speechless-

    'Why wont you leave me be
    Can't you see what you do to me
    I'm growing weaker now, you'll see
    Clutch the trigger, Count To Three'

    this stanza gave me the chills-i love it-AMAZINGLY written-love the choice of words-you're a wonderful writer-keep up the great work-you're VERY talented-laterrr-meg :]

  • 18 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    You are officially one of my favorite poets...that was really, very good, although sad. Keep it up 5/5

    Breanna

  • 18 years ago

    by VICTORIAmia

    That was good it had an unusal patteren
    but itwas good
    read mine

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