Comments : Count To Three

  • 18 years ago

    by VICTORIAmia

    That was good it had an unusal patteren
    but itwas good
    read mine

  • 18 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    You are officially one of my favorite poets...that was really, very good, although sad. Keep it up 5/5

    Breanna

  • 18 years ago

    by Miss Megan

    Brillant poem!-i'm literally speechless-

    'Why wont you leave me be
    Can't you see what you do to me
    I'm growing weaker now, you'll see
    Clutch the trigger, Count To Three'

    this stanza gave me the chills-i love it-AMAZINGLY written-love the choice of words-you're a wonderful writer-keep up the great work-you're VERY talented-laterrr-meg :]