I love your poem it shows that u love jesus and that he is ur savoir

This poem was quite good, some of the rhymes were a bit off, but over all it was a great poem. I'm sure Jesus agrees.

I like this poem it has a nice flow and a good meaning
well done
xxxxxxx
emma
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I loved this!
Totally amazing!
The structure was perfect and the rhyming wasn't too blatant!
The meaning it has is powerful and comes across well :)
Keep it up,
Riffy xx

I totally agree with "Riffy" Great structure, and i agree with emma too, Nice flow, never read any of your poems before but now im going too in a heartbeat because this was a beautiful poem, Keep up the good work :)
God bless
Colt

I Really Liking your poems, Sorry, I'll add you to favourites, and comment better later, I'm kinda out of it.. Great poem though.

Kate. x.

Wow hunnie ur fantastic at poems keep it all up 5/5 luv shakira x

The phrase "endless rivers of agony streaming" for some reason really touched me, as though i understood the pain you go through each day. v gd lvFarrahxx

I think thats a fantastic poem. im not very religious, but that was touching. great work, keep it up :)
luv tammie xox

I think this poem is great. its shows what a great friend amy is to you and how much fun you have. its nice :) keep it up!
luv tammie xox

I thought of the content as boring and long and cliched.

This is just beautiful Sammib, I am speechless, I am glad I found you here, its a pleasure to read such fine words. Thanx, Timothy r