Great poem lovin it my dad died and this is touching!!! xxxxx keep it up xxx

I really enjoyed this poem. Its nice to see people not taking their fathers for granted. I lost my dad when i was young and this shows what life was like with me and my dad before he died. Touched my heart so thank you for writing it.
Jade x

:'( you are very lucky - my dad doesnt love me..but I am blessed to have the most awesome mother!! Thank you for sharing this, at least i can take joy in someone elses happiness!!

God bless
Sammib

Lovely. you cpuld feel the love. very well written!!

Ruby