I will not give up

by rar   Apr 18, 2006


You caused more pain,
because you could not see,
how much i loved you,
and now were through.

i found love,
and now i have lost it,
it either grows or dies,
gives us strenth or weakness.

i will not give up,
not matter what it takes,
because you mean too much to me,
to just let you go.

you were my first love,
and now your gone,
we have been falling apart for so long,
but you just could not see.

i tried to help you,
i tried to help us both,
now your gone,
you do not seem to even care.

i will never forget you,
my first true love,
you will always be in me,
even though were apart.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kara

    Hey again i liked this one also it reminds me of my first love...however my first real love is with the guy i am with now and even though i have thought i was in love before i know now that i really wasnt but i know what love is now and i know that this one is my first REAL love...i liked this one alot!!

  • 18 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Years refine its grace, But only with devotion And much imagination
    To freshen the familiar. But, ah! what then the freedom That comes alone from giving And knowing that your wishes Will be your lover's pleasure! lol.. beautiful penned you've done here, flowed well with good ryhme, keep your smiling, take care.

    bert.

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hey this is sweetly done, i liked it.

    all the best and take care
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl a t0uching piece l0ts 0f em0ti0n very well written. thank u f0r ur c0mment 0n my p0em. meant al0t t0 me!! =]

    l0ve fr0m
    d0ra

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