Hey darl a t0uching piece l0ts 0f em0ti0n very well written. thank u f0r ur c0mment 0n my p0em. meant al0t t0 me!! =]

l0ve fr0m
d0ra

Hey this is sweetly done, i liked it.

all the best and take care
5/5

Years refine its grace, But only with devotion And much imagination
To freshen the familiar. But, ah! what then the freedom That comes alone from giving And knowing that your wishes Will be your lover's pleasure! lol.. beautiful penned you've done here, flowed well with good ryhme, keep your smiling, take care.

bert.

Hey again i liked this one also it reminds me of my first love...however my first real love is with the guy i am with now and even though i have thought i was in love before i know now that i really wasnt but i know what love is now and i know that this one is my first REAL love...i liked this one alot!!