Look at me

by ness   Apr 18, 2006


Look at me
I'm supposed to die
See how high I can fly
Falling off that lonely rooftop
Crowds below telling me to stop
Loot at me
What I can do
I can starve just like you
Go for days on poisoned air
Continue to cry how life's not fair
Look at me
How strong I am
Power to take that gleaming knofe
Push it hard ending my life
Look at me
See what I do
Take that rope
And tie it hard
Round my throat
Too selfish to even leave you a note
Look at me
Your precious child
I can collect 100's of pills
Big ones, small ones, evil in all
Swallow them whole
JD to allow my death to approach
Look at me
It's time you see
Suicide is a fate for me
Please don't cry
It's me who must die
Only remember my selfish life

* I don't think it takes courage to die, it takes courage to live but I was angry and upset when I wrote this*

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  • 18 years ago

    by SingleWing

    Do you have an eating disorder? this is really good, creates a good atmosphere.

  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy B

    It might take courage o live, but it is always courage well worth spending in the end. life is a gift, but we only see the beauty of it in the later years....
    Tim

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Pretty good peice, well written and very expressive seemed almost angry as you read though but with an elemment of saddness there too. it flows well and the content is well expressed

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