by KAYLA EILAND Apr 18, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Iâm just a little person with big time blues. |
by aaron 1 remo
Heya! this was really cool the only critisism i have is it sounds a little bit messy, by this i mean the rhythms of the lines are a bit jumbled up try rephrasing them to fit into a set rhythm this will make your poem flow more easily pm me if i have confused you or if i got it wrong |