Wow... amazing!! it wasn't always fluid, but i love the structure!

"Motionless run driven by feet that won't move
The time has come; what have you to prove?"

i love those lines! stay strong and take care,
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Imi place asha tare k tre s scriu in romana:))...keep writing

Very well done with the title going down the side.
Feeling like my heart's been fold.
I don't think 'fold' is the correct form that should be used here.
But I did want to say that I loved this next line.
Motionless run driven by feet that won't move
Very picture-painting!
Nice job though definitely upsetting!
Charisma*