by Twisted Heart Apr 18, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
Cast your eyes upon the horizon of untruth |
A very strong ending and a magnificient poem! |
Soo lovely its breath taking 5/5 ! |
by sibyllene
"crazy on a ship of fools...." it's a song, and now it's in my head. this really is a good piece of writing |
To quote a commercial..."BRIlLIANT!" I think this poem is very publishable. Have you tried to submit it to any contests or magazines or such. |
by Jacklyn
This poem is amazing, i had this detailed picture in my mind the entire time and it never lost my attention. i love how you ended it and plus it's quiet an interesting title. |