Can we Make this Forever?

by myshiningstar14   Apr 18, 2006


Your eyes mixed in
mine, that forever
make this rhyme.
keep following the
neon-sign, and we
can make this
forever.

You don't have to
say a thing, one
look and I'm there.
Your hand stroking
my hair, and how
we're always told
we're a perfect pair.

Can we make this
forever? This will
never sever, and I
can't find anything
better.

You don't have to
sigh and tell me
all the whys,
because I already
know. Thanks for
letting it show.

Can we make this
forever? This will
never sever,
we have much
to weather, and
I won't find
anything better.

to all those who want to make it forever. luz yaz

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  • 18 years ago

    by ...Vince...

    Pretty good rhymes, pretty good poem overall. i liked it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tripp

    Aww i love this poem. i can identify with it so well too. you two seem like you'll last forever already, and i really hope you do. Me and Becky have been together for almost a year, and this bond feels unbreakable...
    keep up the great work lissa