Turning Back Time

by Lauren   Apr 18, 2006


She cries alone late at night
Missing the times he held her tight.
Screaming for him not to go,
Watching him walk away with that h0e.
Knowing everything that they had was a lie,
A tear forms in her eye.
Thinking back to all the times they shared,
Now knowing that he never even cared.
With one last thought of him in her mind,
She wishes she could turn back the hands of time.

Slowly she reaches for the razor,
And drags it across her wrist.
For her death,
is sealed with a kiss.

*well...um...not my best

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  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Wow i thought it was really good.. i agree with it not being your best.. but it was still great keep it up 5/5

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by alana

    Very good..
    ive been there a time or two
    if its true n about you dont give in ta the razor ive done that too it only makes more problems n its soo much harder ta recover
    jus keep your head up n believe in your self
    much love
    always alana

  • 18 years ago

    by Jon Hunt

    Not your best you say, but good nonetheless. The raw feeling of pain is evident and well portrayed.

    and although i dont enjoy the concept of self harm or suicide.. i feel the ending does however do justice. Somehow it is different, somewhat detached, but yet effective.

    Jon
    x

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