Nice....it has a quality of...well the only word that actually comes to my brain dead mind is beautiful. The images, the words, even the flow worked together to create something that is pristine in its difference and very well done. Excellent work.

"Kisses of gold and
love never old. A
true sacrifice that
never folds, but
continues to hold
and mold our souls."

That was just an astonishing part of the whole though each stanza had its own appeal.
~Faith

It really is a pretty poem :). great rhyming...even when poems 'just come to you' they are amazing. strong, and bold poem, that spoke me. great job

Yup its a very pritty poem... not sure wht its about tho lol