Life time of sin

by demonicpossesion   Apr 18, 2006


Right now I've entered in
my life time of sin
LUSTING after a lost love
lost through faults of my own

i shouldn't of let you go
that was a big mistake
cause i know i love you
ENVY enters in
envious of the other guys
whose arm's you've been in

here's number 3 for me
revenge has come my way
revenge against my self
cause of that awful day

that awful day i stopped
i stopped and let you go
i wish i stayed with you
rather than going away

i know it sounds silly but heres my 4
i want you to my self from now and evermore
now the door is open, my 4 have come on in
my fourth is greed to keep you for my self

now I'm over run by sin
i started on the biggest 4
now where do i begin

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  • 16 years ago

    by Come What May

    Ok, so I really like this poem alot, but I'm an English minor so I'm kind of a critical reader...so as I was reading I edited a little...just some friendly tips if you'd like to use them.
    1. in stanza 2 line 1 you wrote shouldn't of, and it really should be changed to shouldn't have.
    2. in stanza 2 line 6, you wrote whose arm's it should be whose arms (no apostrophe)
    and finally
    3. stanza 4 lines 2 and 4, myself is only one word.
    Anyway, like i said, i loved it but i hope those help! Keep writing!

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