Nice poem colton, i love it. always keep your eye on the goal; always make that goal your own. keep up the writing.. and thank you so much for all your comments! very uplifting:).

Hmm.. i love this poem.. you tackle some real issues.. people seem to lose track of themselves wishing to be someone else... anyhu great job hon
~court

I like that poem its pretty. keep writing poems ur really good at it!

anjolina

This is an awesome poem. I think people need to hear that, and stop worrying about what everyone else is doing and concentrate on their own goals and dreams. You're a super duper great writer keep up the good work.
-michele