But without you, I just wouldn't be the same...

by Tripp   Apr 19, 2006


Haven't done a love poem for a while, and after getting in the mood, I turned this out...comment, and tell me what you think

I'd take a bullet for you
I'd freaking starve for you
I'd do anything just so show
that my love for you is true

If you were to slit my throat
Stand above my body and gloat
I'd apologize to you
for bleeding on your coat

It's this simple, and this plain
that even if you were to maim
me, and beat me to the edge
I'd do anything, to your love gain

You and I were made for each other
These feelings we have, are like no other
I love you more than a sister, or a best friend
All I need to know, is that we love one another

I'll buy you what you want, chocolates or roses
until the door on our relationship closes
but that'll never happen, never be the case
it seems like both of us have been blessed by Moses

And as my ink from my pen bleeds
I look back on all these deeds
that we have done for each other
I have to see you, its one of those needs

Whether we're together, or apart
these words come straight from my heart
the fact of the matter is, I need you
you're like a drug, or a wonderful piece of art

And I'm addicted to you, can't stop looking
can't stop taking it, since day one you've been hooking
me, and now I cant live without you,
all these feelings are borne, from my gook

Of a body, mess of a brain
and as I close this poem, I feel quite lame
for these cheesy rhymes,
but without you, I just wouldn't be the same

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thanks to Raychel, for helping me with some of these rhymes, and the final product of this work

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    P.s YOU HAVE RED HAIR!!!!!! RAYCHEL SHOWED ME UR PICS....!! AGGHHHHH!!!RED HAIR??? THATS SOOOO NOT YOU...PLUS I DIDNT KNO UR NAME WAS WILLIAM..... THE FFREAKIN THIRD??? WTF?
    STILL LOVE YA LOTTS,
    sore

  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    I loved it! u hav some surefire talent and i like the way u use metaphors for how much u love her...she must be some girl to get ue affection like this, keep going strong,
    love ya lots,
    sore

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Aww that was sweet, in an angered, emotional way. I could feel your desperation here, and almost hear you pleading and screaming each intense line. I loved it. Keep up your good work, and thank you so much for your sweet comments! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    WOW I loved this one...all the stanzas..this is the most gorgeosu poem ever!! I esp love the 2nd stanza..wow i mean this is all too much. You've gotten incrediably good..keep ti up buddy,,,,bc once again i am touched beyond words...but i can so relate to this!!

    Lissa

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Great work.

    If you were to slit my throat
    Stand above my body and gloat
    I'd apologize to you
    for bleeding on your coat

    I loved that stanza - it seemed to be the most sincere, and it truly portrays my feelings. Wonderful write.

    Peace. [Sole]