by Tripp Apr 19, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Haven't done a love poem for a while, and after getting in the mood, I turned this out...comment, and tell me what you think |
P.s YOU HAVE RED HAIR!!!!!! RAYCHEL SHOWED ME UR PICS....!! AGGHHHHH!!!RED HAIR??? THATS SOOOO NOT YOU...PLUS I DIDNT KNO UR NAME WAS WILLIAM..... THE FFREAKIN THIRD??? WTF? |
I loved it! u hav some surefire talent and i like the way u use metaphors for how much u love her...she must be some girl to get ue affection like this, keep going strong, |
by Sarah Ann
Aww that was sweet, in an angered, emotional way. I could feel your desperation here, and almost hear you pleading and screaming each intense line. I loved it. Keep up your good work, and thank you so much for your sweet comments! 5/5 |
WOW I loved this one...all the stanzas..this is the most gorgeosu poem ever!! I esp love the 2nd stanza..wow i mean this is all too much. You've gotten incrediably good..keep ti up buddy,,,,bc once again i am touched beyond words...but i can so relate to this!! |
by Sole
Great work. |