This is awesome!! thnxx for the cred tho!! this is a 5/5 poem. my fave stanza was the second one. funny as he l l. keep it up!!

Great work.

If you were to slit my throat
Stand above my body and gloat
I'd apologize to you
for bleeding on your coat

I loved that stanza - it seemed to be the most sincere, and it truly portrays my feelings. Wonderful write.

Peace. [Sole]

WOW I loved this one...all the stanzas..this is the most gorgeosu poem ever!! I esp love the 2nd stanza..wow i mean this is all too much. You've gotten incrediably good..keep ti up buddy,,,,bc once again i am touched beyond words...but i can so relate to this!!

Lissa

Aww that was sweet, in an angered, emotional way. I could feel your desperation here, and almost hear you pleading and screaming each intense line. I loved it. Keep up your good work, and thank you so much for your sweet comments! 5/5

I loved it! u hav some surefire talent and i like the way u use metaphors for how much u love her...she must be some girl to get ue affection like this, keep going strong,
love ya lots,
sore

P.s YOU HAVE RED HAIR!!!!!! RAYCHEL SHOWED ME UR PICS....!! AGGHHHHH!!!RED HAIR??? THATS SOOOO NOT YOU...PLUS I DIDNT KNO UR NAME WAS WILLIAM..... THE FFREAKIN THIRD??? WTF?
STILL LOVE YA LOTTS,
sore