Really good. i'm almost on the edge of my seat now cuz that seemed like a interesting story, and if u want pls tell me what u decided to do and how it turned out?

Oh by the way, loved the confused part of it all! now that is definately what u were going through and u did a good job to describe it and make us feel it

Reborn...if you see this then just leave a comment...matter of fact i decided to give him a chance and everything went well for a whole year, but then i let it fall apart and things just didnt work out...but yeah, thanx for all your comments, they really really built up my confidence about all my poems and im going to get into writing again soon, i just dont know when lol. but as soon as i can im going to check yours out because the way u get deep with your comments i cant imagine how great your poems mite be...but once again, thank you

Heather