Hey i wish i had a boyfriend as sweet as you.........your poem was great......maybe you could read one of mine sumday........im not to good tho.... xox teagz

It's fab! I say you show it to your girlfriend! I love it and Im a woman so she should too.

Lolz. i feel the emotion. bravo. god i wish my boyfriend could write me something even CLOSE to this...but i still ,

Aww, I agree, it's not your best - but it's very sweet.

Peace. [Sole]

I really thought that was cute 5/5

thanks for sharing
shannon

It's good! You spilled your heart out and wrote your feelings down on paper. There is nothing more original and pleasing than that. Keep it up 5/5