This poem is perfect except for this rime that i think needs to be changed to go along with this poem:
"I want to wake up next to u every morning safe in your arms from the rest of this world".

Cuz it's too long and breaks the smoothness of the poem, apart from that man that is a great poem, loved it! And this guy is a lucky guy. I liked the fact that it's set out as a commitment to a stranger whom u've never met but u already know u'll love to the end. sorry i'm really into this poem, i get carried away in my comment....lol
Anyways i hope ur not upset with all of my commenting since this is like the 4th or 5th poem i comment but i like ur style so, might as well read all of your poems instead of reading crappy ones from less talented writers.