Wonderful poem Bjness. I love them, keep writing more for Philliness, so you can read my comments to make it seem cuter than I intended it to be lol *Hugs*

Tht was so good......reminds me of me n my boyfriend.......xox teagz

This is a great poem, It reminds me of a guy I once loved, its very sad and If u want my advice/opinion MOVE ON bcoz ur better than they r ;), U deserve to be loved ;)

Your poem is beautiful.its so true how ever girl that gets dumped thinks that it was all there falt, i loved the way that you put your word all together. now im defenily getting over my x. Thanks*big hug!*