The day i met you, the day i fell in love with you,

by Teagz   Apr 19, 2006


The day i met you, the day i fell in love.

i member the day i first met you,
your smile just made me fall in love with u.

i love you......so much in so many ways....
your smile makes me smile, your hugs make me feel warm n safe, your laugh makes me laugh, your smell makes me never wanna leave Ur side.....all i ever want to tell you is how i feel.....how YOU make me feel.....

i member the day we walked together and you held my hand, i member the day we talked for hours and hours on the phone.....i member all the days I'm with you....you make me so happy. I just want to tell you how much I LOVE YOU

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tripp

    I member the day i first met you,
    your smile just made me fall in love with u.

    good lines right there. just, when you write, try to have it follow a pattern. if you notice my later poems, they all follow a layout...but yeah, other than that, this poem has emotion and love in every line, and i can certainly identify with it. keep improving