or sign in with e-mail
by Lying To Live Apr 19, 2006 category : Sadness, depression / about depression
Pain is where you cannot move Whether physical or emotional It will wear you out Until you give into its battle And then you just sink lower Nothing seems to matter Your little bag of misery Will just continue to get fatter It will grow inside you Until you are about to pop Youll start doing things You want have the power to stop You wont call people back You will lock all your doors The things you once enjoyed Wont take your interest anymore Your mates will start to wonder What happened to their friend? Youll say that things have changed From that point they will notice your descend Theyll notice you misplaced your smile And you arent eating anything Theyll notice when you go to your favourite karaoke bar That you didnt even sing But they wont try to help They think theres nothing they can do If only they would know That all you need is someone to care for you And at one stage Youll need to release all your pain Then once thats done Itll build up once again Pain will be there all your life Wether or not you try to push it away Pain will be the Rolla coaster of your life Until your dying day XoX thanx for reading ...plz vote or comment
by Natalie
A great poem. It was really good. && A Great way to describe pain. But I really love it, Mainly cause there's so much truth behind it. Great job 5/5 `natalie x-x
by Fay
Its a beautiful poem, very emotional, I can relate to it, i enjoyed reading ;) keep writing