I liked this poem. Usually I do not like rhyming poems but in this case I found your rhyming to add to the piece and I also noticed it didn't come off as forced at all. This piece feels incredibly honest and exposing to me, I liked the sincerity you wrote with. :)

One of your best. exquisite. i loved it. i loved how you almost drew a picture of yourself with your words. you gave the reader such an insight into your being, and i feel privilaged to have read it

Ruby

One of your best. exquisite. i loved it. i loved how you almost drew a picture of yourself with your words. you gave the reader such an insight into your being, and i feel privilaged to have read it

Ruby

Fabulous Em, really good. however i have just one query.... YOU'RE SHORT????? LMAO. i spose ur short and i'm midget. lol
Ttyl, my friend]
-Suz
xox

Holy mother of... This is perfect, I am simply speachless...

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