Great :)

This was really awesome...it actually almost made me cry! WOWSERS

Wonderful!.. Gave me chills. 5/5

This is really sad, but sweet and good.... keep it up

This poem was a little odd at some places, one line was really long and stands out quite badly
It may look neater if you capitalised the "i"s in the poien (as in "I am doing...")
The lines don't always flow too good, if you could find a count then it may help
The content of the poem was great, it was really sad and quite touching...the use of crying always works :D...if you can get the flow right it would be even better
Again another excellent poem

Geez i thot ur post said u were bad now..u r so not! that was gr8 it had emotion and detail! 5/5!
~*Who Cares?*~

That was deep. i loved it, this poem realli stands out for me because somebody i loved committed suicide...
5/5 girl great job
check some of mine out if you get a chance x