Wow, i feel the same damn way. This is one of my favorite poems man, I havent read something this good for a while. Hey can you read this poem/freestyle lyrical peice i just wrote called "Walls are the cure"? And comment.

Aweh i like this

wanting people to realize how special you are and then dying and seeing how their eyes will open and see what they have lost.

great write 5/5

Wow..I like this poem it flows really well too, makes alot of sense and is very heart felt and touching..I enjoyed reading it great job.

Wow sooo sad.. its realy heartbreaking how easily some people give up the fight of life.. I hope that this isnt true cause your poems are so wonderful the world would be a darker place withouth them. nice job

Wow that is really sad and you did a great job on describing everything. It's short, but holds a lot of emotion. It's very beautiful and expressive and definitely sends out a powerful message. Great job on this!

Wow. That's er, quite depressing. I suddenly feel a pointlessness of life. Good work for making me think though. It's not easy to make really look at life from different angles. x

Quite a powerful write, the ending especially. It is how some people feel, that life is pointless and it will be better when they're gone. A suicide poem with a difference.
On the fourth line of the first stanza, it should be "you're." Have you checked out my article on homophones? It may help you with things like your and you're.
Good work.

Wow i really loved that poem it was great. thanks for the advice on my poem by the way. if you think you could read some others and comment with any advice u might have ill be glad to return the favor...ur in my favorites =)

Wow i really loved that poem it was great. thanks for the advice on my poem by the way. if you think you could read some others and comment with any advice u might have ill be glad to return the favor...ur in my favorites =)

Wow i really loved that poem it was great. thanks for the advice on my poem by the way. if you think you could read some others and comment with any advice u might have ill be glad to return the favor...ur in my favorites =)

Wow, that was amazing! I read it about 10 million times until I felt I got everythign I could out of it, every single word! I liked these lines the best!

Nothing remains of who you were.
Just an empty shell and nothing more,

They rhymed nicly and gave the reader that mouth droping feeling! lol Nice work! Keep writting and as always I'll keep reading!

Wow.. this is really an amazing poem.

This poem totally knocked the breath out of me. i love it!

Another great poem
keep it up
Lana

Great poem, very nice work keep it up

Again, an excellent job. 5/5

This poem was really good i liked it alot..