Excellent excellent poem!! Keep up the great work! I really really liked that, u have no idea. lol. U explained so many things i have been thinking. GBU! Pepa

This poem is cool, I can't quite figure out what is going on...but besides that, I like your word choice and stanza pattern. Good poem

Wonderful! Wow, you write excellent! Such beautiful and creative work!! I can relate to you so easily! Loved it! Please keep writing! GBU!! Pepa