This was really good. I never really know what to say about your poems, Cause I really like them. Theres nothing I ever think needs to be changed. The idea's are always great. Everything's perfect. I guess all I can really say is. Keep the poems comming, Cause I love reading them =] But 5/5 for this. It was done really well!!

`natalie x-x

You've got a unique style and I really like that! This is very deep and heart grinding. Superb write!!

Brilliant pecei, very well written, captureing the reader the reader with the very first line and holding them to the last. cannot think of a single critisisum of it, found no faults what-so-ever.

55/

Wow again your imagery is amazing. the whole thing is great. i love:
Heaven listening to her
pleading voice, her prayers
unanswered, her words unspoken.

...When life abandons another child

and the end is great. nice job

This is pretty deep...good job...5/5

Wow love, your use of imagery and discription was amazing. I liked the first section, that described what it was like for an angel to cry so deeply. The rain stanza, "Ocean blue being pelted with curtained rain, never concluding every shower," too the old idea of a curtain of rain, and really made it your own. I was impressed. It was also great artestry to have the first four lines all continue the flower imagery that you created so well. Angels are the apidamy of grace and beauty, so it is only fitting that something with such earthly beauty as a flower would wilt at the tears of an angel, so sorrowful and so very beautiful at the same time. I also love how she is praying with her whole soul, and yet unable to utter a single word. Heartbreak is a tale that will go on for all of time, but you illistrated that idea in a poem that can be timeless.

-Tainted Mikochan

WOW that was amazing! Your use of diction and imagery is really excellent. I see your poetry only in the face of perfection and that is all.

"Bleeding rose weathered from the storm,
internal battle picking the petals.
Pricked beating heart dying in his hand,
shattered life ending from his touch.
"Ocean blue being pelted with curtained rain,
never concluding every shower.
Windswept hair ruffled from the breeze,
vacant compassion for her damaged mind.

This is what it is like when an angel cries"

The imagery in that stanza was great, and so were the words. It was very touching and creative. Overall I absolutely loved this poem and I saw no flaws at all! Keep it up. 5/5

Oh, i loved this. it was really imagainative and well written. It was way more creative than any of my poems, i loved it. well done.
Tara-Kay xxx

You know kali your a wonder poet i wish i coudl write as good as poems as you can. how you get so good at these poems?? Well let me know id love to figure it out

Im impressed with your use of diction and the various images you have portrayed in this.
I'm not all that sure I liked the part about the angel crying. It just seems out of character from the rest of the poem in the sense that is an over used phrase and the rest of the poem is very original.
I liked the ending line, it gave a strong final statement to sum the poem up.
Well done, thanks for sharing.

Awesome, the images were perfect.

'Bleeding rose weathered from the storm'

What a great line - and what a picture. If I was an artist - I would start drawing that right away! Unfortunately, I cannot draw - but you can write amazing poetry.

Peace. [Sole]

Very nice one.....loved the flow of it... one of your best by far!...keep it up!
~*Linz*~

Wonderful job, great imagery. Can you r/c my no-rhyme poem *Turning away from the light**

Very sad...but amazing...and writen so well...i just am speachless...great job...
Emma 5/5

Wow the imagery & emotion in this poem is Amazing!! Its very strong and powerful!! I loved it!
"Drowning memories never fade;
they resurface when the tide rolls in."
Those are my favorite lines.
Great job! 5/5**

Wow... a lost of words... this was very deep and powerful... I loved it so much... definite 5/5... keep up the good work!

"When life abandons another child" Such a sad and powerful line...
I thought it was beautiful and the freeverse worked excellently
Its such an emotional story, and it has been put into words perfectly
WD

Good job Kali. I liked it alot. It has a lot of emotion to it. I know how you feel too. I went through sexual abuse all throughout my childhood.
5/5

One word = amazing.

Good poem