I love the way you write! Amazing!
Keep writing!

This is really amazing... keep up the good work..

Amazing!

This was a great powerful poem that was so descriptive!! 5/5!!
-Kristin

This was a fantastic poem to read, very inspirational and emotional, very touching and one of your best so far so keep up the good work!!!!

"Clouds blocking the sunlight
cast shadows on her aching soul",
"fragments buried beneath sandy skin." --> really powerfull lines :) i liked them the most :) once again i'm astonished by your poem, i'd kill to have such talent like you :) just never stop writing ;) amazing poem once again :) 5/5

Wow . Thats such an amazing poem . 5/5 for sure ! well done

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Amzing imagery.. i loved it

He loves this damaged girl
If he could, he would kiss away her pain.

Those were two wonderful, amazing lines! You're poems are so great! I love everything about them, I can barely offer any critique!

Very intense yet again a real feeling of anger, great vocab and gentle and sadness with a sense of want and hope

Sondos

I liked this better than the country pieces and ill tell you why.

it sounds to me like they were written by the same person. i totally like your aproach to this piece, the language used and the style, but it seems to me like you tried to do the same thing on the country songs and it just seems a little unnatural to me. good job on this one, i really liked it!
-Luke

This is awesome. I don't think I've seen a style quite like yours, you write perfectly. This poem was heartfelt and moving. I loved it.