by Brooke Thompson Apr 19, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
Shadows fall upon a midnight moon |
Great formation and use of rhymes, great dark story wonderfuly writen 5 strars lynne |
by Sean Allen
"Careless those who become entranced" |
by SCARECROW
Also, I congratulate you for not binding yourself completely to a rhyme-scheme of sorts. I despise people who rely solely on rhyme-schemes. Speaking from opinion though, because I believe (as rhyme schemes were created by OTHER PEOPLE) it is not very original for the author. |
by SCARECROW
This is the first poem of yours I have read, and I am adding you to my favourites. Exquisite work. |
by oldthings
It's a well written poem with a very cool story in it. It created such great visual picture as I read it. The flow could be a bit better but overall i liked it =) good job. |