Absolutely beautiful poem, great tribute to a friend with this beautiful penned, you've a gold heart that no many have, chel, god bless you, keep your smiling, take care.

bert.

*wipes yet another chelsey inflicted tear* - of happiness

My titta, this is really special. I am so glad to have such an effect and influence on your young life, to guide you, listen to you and understand you without judgement or precedence of whatever situation life throws at you. You are so very wise for your years sometimes it shocks me, I learn something new from you each day. Your effervescent spirit and radiating light brings comfort and love to me from across the seas...your the best lil sis ever and I love you more than you could ever know.

Wonderful! So beautiful and loving. Magnificent, touching write.

Awesme poem, AWESOME!!!!! ALL UR POEMS THAT I HAVE READ ARE GREAT!!!! UR A NATURAL. THEY ARE SO POWERFUL, EMOTIONAL AND BEAUTIFUL KEEP IT UP

HANNAH

Oh dear! that was so touching......i loved it. u wrote down ur feelings lol!

awesome job.....5/5

luv

Thta poem is absolutely beautiful.. keep it up

This is such a sweet poem! good job!

This is really good.it tells people how you feel. I have never and i mean never see a poem do that what yours did. I LIKE IT A LOT

This is more a story than a poem but the fact that you r thanking some1 sincerely made it look so. noble feelings in ure poems.

keep it up dear

I have a sister who is 10 years older than me.
I'm thirteen right now. And just like you said... oh god. Everything you said. From asking God for someone, from realizing that she was my gift... to crying about my maturity that my parents overlooked, to her being the only one who'd see it... the support she eoffers, gosh everything!
I can relate so much its scary. I hope you don't mind, but in two years from now.. I'll give this to her. I'll give you credit- no worries. just let me know if i can?

ty

This is very emotioanl & beautiful. Feels like the words have come out from me for my oen sister.
Keep up the good work.