Having read your quotes as well and re-reading this I understood it more, and I like it a lot... I gave all your quotes 5 except for the last one which didn't come on to me... ah well...

love and light :-))

Really lovely, but obcviously sad at the time...bittersweetin fact. good work xx

I really liked it. i love how it tells a story and yet youve managed to make it rhyme. that takes skiiiilll haha
keep it going
dee

Sweet!!! Love ur Poem!!! Keep it Up!!! Stop by and comment my poems....if u have time!