by PS Apr 19, 2006
category :
Special events /
other poems
The happy smell of Easter cake |
by Bridgette
This is such a beautiful poem! The flow & rhyme scheme was perfect. And I liked the repetition of every last sentence. Great job! 5/5* |
by Simon Hayes
This is superb! I really enjoyed this one, made my mouth water... Such a chocolate enticing poem. The use of the form is outstanding and the flow exquisite! |
by Tripp
Absolutely amazing...perfect rhythm and rhyme. i'd choose a favorite stanza, but quite truthfully I like all of them :). keep up the good work |
by Tripp
Absolutely amazing...perfect rhythm and rhyme. i'd choose a favorite stanza, but quite truthfully I like all of them :). keep up the good work |
by Melissa
I love this, so beautifully written! Flawless flow with a wonderful choice of words, well done! :) |