I tried to tell you...

by xXxDarkDreamerxXx   Apr 19, 2006


Why do you say it will be okay
Every time you see me depressed
Is there nothing else you can say?
To you my sins I will never confess.

You stare at me as if dazed
trying to figure me out,
but you dont know that my mind is just a maze
with no exit to ever be found

You said that my nightmares were only dreams
that they would never hurt me
but I always woke up in silent screams
Why cant I be free?

I tried to show you my real self
but you were always blind.
And you could never tell
that there was only darkness and no light

left inside my life, my soul
My heart has been played with and broken
there is no longer warmth in my life but the winter cold

I will leave all my fears unspoken...

Copyright ©2006 Jeannette R

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  • 18 years ago

    by мσяιтυяαм

    This one kind of reminds me off my parents attempts to understand me, i know they are only trying to help, but i dont want there help, i just want them to leave me alone.
    anyway, this was a great poem and thank you ever so much for your comments on my poems, it really means a lot to me that you have taken the time to read most of them and offer your thoughts.i am sorry that i have not commented back very much but my time on the computer is limited and usually i only have time to post my poems then my parents kick me off.. grrrr but i will try and comment on more of your poems from school! i will not rest until i repay the favour i swear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    xX velvet kisses Xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Nyx

    Hey thats pretty good

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Oh and thanks for the comment you gave me. it was greatly appreciated!

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Excellent poem. The rhyming was great

  • 18 years ago

    by A Former Outcast

    Very good as well. I like it a lot. Rhyme scheme is slightly iffy in the third stanza, but what's a comment without some slight criticism to help improve? This poem was excellent, and I couldn't do better. Five out of five.

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