by emmaroo Apr 19, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Shes a little girl young n small |
Awesome!!! That was some wicked poem keep up the writing :) check out my lyrics I have on my page if you want. and rate them :) |
by ShadowDancer
Nice. the lenghts of soem of te lines were a bit off. but the idea was great. the wording was pretty good. |
by XxTearDropxX
Its such a crazy kool poem. i loved it. it keeped me thinking trew the whole thing thank for commenting my poem |
I loved it. it is a story within a poem.Very good. : ) |
by Colton
Awsome Poem!,loved it, I reccomend you keep writing because i will definitly keep reading :) |