My Spirit Walked Away

by Sarah Ann   Apr 19, 2006


Memories-experiences
Painted portraits of the heart,
Killing me, engulfing me
Tearing my soul apart

Inside my mind exists one thing
Memories glowing of that day,
Still eating me up constantly,
They refuse to go away

Memories-experiences
Enough to pull me into hades
The chains are strong and I am falling
Falling quickly as life fades

Inside my mind exists one thing
Memories glowing of that day
Still eating me up constantly
Since my spirit walked away

((I don't know what this is. For me it is a love poem, but for others it may be meaningless. My poetry is horrible lately. Anyway here it is. Please comment and I will return the favor!))

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~~Lindsay Woods~~

    This was very good!...one of your best!...keep it up!
    ~*Linz*~

  • 18 years ago

    by jello

    This is good! i gave ya a 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Biscuit

    The repetition works really well here, but the second stanza doesnt really make sense, i think there might be a word missing somewhere :S

  • 18 years ago

    by azlan26

    It really isn't horrible! And I can see how it could be a love poem, with the trecurring memory and not being able to get it out of your head? Or am I like stolling down a completely wrong path
    Don't knock your poetry... because it is excellent!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tripp

    Memories-experiences
    Painted portraits of the heart,
    Killing me, engulfing me
    Tearing my soul apart

    great stanza. and if you consider this horrible, i wanna know what you think good is haha. great poem, I enjoyed reading it.

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