Comments : Summer Delights

  • 18 years ago

    by erely

    This is a great read and is uplifting
    good job

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    Oh i love this. the rhyme and flow is amazing. and the imagery is great. i can totally feel it happening.

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    This is awesome, Simon! So peaceful, love the imagery..

    "Summer nights are blissful,
    Watch the sun set in the sky.
    Stars illuminate in the firmament
    As shooting stars swish by."
    ^^^ This stanza rocks! And that last line is perfection, love it!

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Oh, another naturistic masterpiece.
    I loathe summer, but you paint it with such magic...
    Take care and keep it up~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by Kim

    Mmm I love summer, I miss the warmth. A lovely write, tasty and sunny!!