Not Okay

by S R P   Apr 19, 2006


Living in an ice cold world
not know where to go
or where to turn..

Life's just a fricked up mess
not knowing how to cope
or when to be at my best..

Chained up inside these walls
I created the life for me..

Something happened long ago
something that haunts me
I can't let go..

Things aren't okay anymore
I'm moving further from the door
walking through it may take all my pain..
even then, it will drive me insane.

Maybe if I dissapear
things would be easier...

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  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Great peice, very well written and powerfully expressive thoughout. though i think that the ending could be improved... the conten of it is fine but the actual wording i feel could be better. the rest of the peice is very xpressive with a good structure and loads of feeling.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    Awwww how sad =(
    sad poems here are really expressive!!!
    I hope this will turn to be okay..I liked ur poem so much its meaningful and I feel the words stright from the heart
    keep it up
    Luv
    NemO XxXxXxXxX

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