Please Kill Me Again

by Sarah Ann   Apr 19, 2006


I miss you more than you know
From this pain I can't escape
The words you promised, lies you whispered
Has now carved into my grave

I know you never loved me
And I knew it more even then
Ironically, I still need you
Kill me; hurt me, all over again

Push me down into the dirt
Cover up your shame with lies
Use your gifts and gentle touch
To muffle out my cries

Kill me baby gradually
Slowly, like you did before
Make me fall head over heels
Then walk out of my door

Leave me with the striking thought
That you would one day return
And until then forget about me
Baby, let me break and burn

For right now all I'm longing for
Were those days under the sun
The nights we spent together
When I was the only one

It was during those moments
Where my life felt so at ease
So lie to me, make promises
Do this for me, baby please

((This is somewhat...I don't know, It doesn't sound right to me...like it's missing something. Can someone fill me in on that? Anyway, it is what I feel. So, yeah.))

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  • 18 years ago

    by StefQ

    Nice poem :) but i have a couple of improvements :) you used baby 1 time too much i'd say and the start is a bit well strange :S it doesnt rhyme that good :) for the rest it's very discriptvie and very well written although it's not one of your best
    5/5

    ~StefQ

  • 18 years ago

    by Biscuit

    This has some great emotion in it but i think it ends a bit suddenly, stanza 6 seems to be leading somewhere and then suddenly its over... and i noticed in stanza 5 you've written the second line in past tense while the rest is in present...great rhyming though and a joy to read xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Jon Hunt

    Absloutely nothing missing here, personaly i dont know the feeling conveyed here.. however i can feel it through the poem, and from friends who have felt the same.
    And i think you captured everything there is about it very well.

    Wonderful poem.

    Jon
    x

  • 18 years ago

    by azlan26

    The missing thing, it may be that some of the rhymes aren't quite rihgt...but maybe not, it seemed great to me
    I love the irony aspect, that you need them so much when they cause so much pain
    So sad, yet such beautiful poetry

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    Beautiful
    absolutly beautiful!!
    I know this feeling when you want sum1 even tho he caused u so much pain!! I myself dont think this poem needs any changes...so yeah its terrific!! ;)
    take care sweetz
    Luv
    NemO XxXxXxXxX

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