I don't think it's missing anything, it's exactly the way I've felt lately and it's great.
My girlfriend needed "a break" so we've been doing that for like a month, and this whole time i've been wishing she just would have lied to me and acted like it everyhing was okay becuase the truth actualy hurts.

Love poems are always great because they're so easy to interperupt in lotsa ways and this one is too. =) i love it and don't think it's missing anything

Beautiful
absolutly beautiful!!
I know this feeling when you want sum1 even tho he caused u so much pain!! I myself dont think this poem needs any changes...so yeah its terrific!! ;)
take care sweetz
Luv
NemO XxXxXxXxX

The missing thing, it may be that some of the rhymes aren't quite rihgt...but maybe not, it seemed great to me
I love the irony aspect, that you need them so much when they cause so much pain
So sad, yet such beautiful poetry

Absloutely nothing missing here, personaly i dont know the feeling conveyed here.. however i can feel it through the poem, and from friends who have felt the same.
And i think you captured everything there is about it very well.

Wonderful poem.

Jon
x

This has some great emotion in it but i think it ends a bit suddenly, stanza 6 seems to be leading somewhere and then suddenly its over... and i noticed in stanza 5 you've written the second line in past tense while the rest is in present...great rhyming though and a joy to read xx

Nice poem :) but i have a couple of improvements :) you used baby 1 time too much i'd say and the start is a bit well strange :S it doesnt rhyme that good :) for the rest it's very discriptvie and very well written although it's not one of your best
5/5

~StefQ