Unfinished

by Gabba Gabba Hey   Apr 20, 2006


I came home one day an there you were
on the chair, sitting
i went to you
there was no life in your eyes
I never would see it there again
you left my life suddenly
only our last conversation to remember
a fight, cold and cruel
never will it be made right

i step back
stifling a scream
at your feet i fling my self
i stare at you for a while
waiting for the life to come back to your eyes

never to be seen again

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  • 18 years ago

    by innocentcrybaby

    That was a nice poem...gives ya the shivers..lol...cool writing..

    innocent crybaby*

  • 18 years ago

    by Sammib

    This one gave me the chills!! I swear!! How some ppl must suffer losing someone they love and never getting to tell them how they really felt. I like your style of writing. The reader has to pay attention to what they are reading or they wont get what you are saying. Nice!!

    Sammib