My lost love

by william   Apr 20, 2006


She was my heart
she was my soul
now i am empty
i am a shell no heart no soul
she left wit my love
she left me wit no hug
she is gone never to return my lost a man has my love
he took her away i am alone wit no other
i stand by myself lokkin for another
who will love and respect me
i will love again
a girl will have my heart once again

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sammib

    I like how you are trying to get your point of pain across, but when you write, you need to look at what you writing as if you are the reader. That way you will be able to see if your point is getting across and if you are getting your audiences emtions flowing at the same time:) Keep it up:)

    Godbless
    Sammib

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