U have good lines in it but i didnt understand some of it :S, it didnt look like a poem, its more like PERSONAL THOUGHTS ;)

Hmm this just seems as if your wrote down the first words that came to your head, not good at all. dont like the fact its in capitals either. 1/5

I LIKE MY POEM AND IF NO ONE ELSE DOES THEN I DONT CARE ITS MY FEELINGS AND I DONT EXPECT NO ONE TO FEEL LIKE ME SO WHATEVERS CLEVERS LOL THANX THO

WOW this is really good i feel your pain i know it sicks you feel like nobodycares or is even there for that matter you feel empty and all you can do is cry wish that you were dead as you can tell from my poems.....