My Broken Wings...

by Lying To Live   Apr 20, 2006


I cannot fix my broken wings
They are damaged beyond repair
I could ask you to lend me a hand
But I know you just dont care

I could ask you to lend me a hand
But I know you just dont care
You used to love me with all your heart
Now you couldnt care less if I was there

You used to love me with all your heart
Now you couldnt care less if I was there
Oh how I wish you could fix me
Come on help me out its a dare

Oh how I wish you could fix me
Come on help me out its a dare
Help me fix my broken wings
With your help we can mend the tear

Help me fix my broken wings
With your help we can mend the tear
Your caring hands is what I need right now
I already have two but I need an extra pair

Your caring hands is what I need right now
I already have two but I need an extra pair
Show me that you love me
End my awful nightmare

Show me that you love me
End my awful nightmare
So mend my broken wings tonight
Then tomorrow we have my broken heart to repair

XoX thanx for reading

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  • 18 years ago

    by Alistair Fin

    I thought the poem worked better with out the repeating lines but hey, its not my poem

    2.5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Biscuit

    I like the imagery of this poem and the idea is good but im not sure the repetition really works...

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This was really good. I loved how you would repeat the last line onto the next stanza! It was great!! Keep it up =] 5/5

    `natalie x-x

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