Comments : We never win

  • 18 years ago

    by SEAN

    Well written

  • 18 years ago

    by KJ

    That was really good. i wish i could write like that. keep it up!

    ~!*LOVE*!~

  • 18 years ago

    by Ren

    Awww, that poem saddened me :( I know how you feel, and I mean, I know you may get that a lot and its like everyone says it, but I can definitely relate. Great Job and I hope you are alright. YOU'RE IN MY FAVES!! Much love!

  • 18 years ago

    by Chantelle

    This one flows so beautifully from beginning to end. Great piece hun xx

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    Dude, Im always amazed at the talent you have with writting. I wish I could express everything just like you do... well any ways you know ima say great write. ~peace out~ ^_^